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Extended Essay

 
What is the EE?
The extended essay is an in-depth study of a focused topic, undertaken either through a subject-focused approach or an interdisciplinary approach combining two DP subjects. Students choose from the list of available DP subjects for the examination session in question. This is normally one of the student’s six selected subjects (or two in the case of the interdisciplinary pathway) for those taking the IB diploma, or a subject that a course student has a background in.
 
The extended essay is intended to promote academic research and writing skills, providing students with an opportunity to engage in personal research in a topic of their own choice, under the guidance of a supervisor (an appropriately qualified member of staff within the school).
 
Students produce a significant piece of appropriately presented and structured writing, in which ideas and findings are communicated in a coherent, reasoned manner, appropriate to the subject(s) chosen. Students must attend 3 reflection sessions with their supervisor. The third session is a short, concluding interview, or viva voce, that follows the completion of their extended essay. An assessment of this reflection is made under criterion E using the reflection and progress form (RPF).
 
The extended essay, whether subject-focused or interdisciplinary, is assessed against common criteria.
 
Key features of the extended essay:

• The extended essay is compulsory for all students taking the DP and is an option for course students.
• The extended essay is a piece of independent research and writing on a topic chosen by the student in consultation with a designated supervisor in the school.
• The extended essay is presented as a formal piece of academic writing containing no more than 4,000 words accompanied by a reflective statement of no more than 500 words. The statement is included on the RPF.
• The essay is the result of approximately 40 hours of work by the student.
• Students are supported by a supervision process recommended to be three to five hours long, which includes three mandatory reflection sessions; the third and final reflection session is the viva voce, a concluding interview with the supervisor.
• The extended essay process helps to prepare students for the research-driven environment of
university or college.
 
The extended essay is externally assessed and, in combination with the grade for theory of knowledge (TOK), contributes up to three points to the total score for the IB diploma (see below).

• A student must achieve a D grade or higher for the extended essay to be awarded the diploma.
• When choosing a subject for the extended essay, students must consult the list of available DP subjects published in the Diploma Programme Assessment procedures for the examination session in question.
 
EE/TOK Points
EE Timeline
 
 
The primary responsibility for the essay lies with the student, but the supervisor mentors the student through each stage of the process.
 
The total supervision time permitted is 3-5 hours. The supervision model used at MHS includes at least 6 meetings (see EE Timeline):
  • 3 formal reflection sessions (mandatory)
  • 3 informal "check-in" sessions
The role of the supervisor:
  • provide students with advice & guidance in the skills of undertaking the research process
  • encourage & support students throughout the research and writing of the extended essay
  • discuss the choice of topic with each student and, in particular, help to formulate a well-focused research question which is suitable to the subject of registration and ensure that the chosen research question satisfies appropriate legal and ethical standards
  • is familiar with the regulations governing the EE & assessment criteria and check that the student is conforming to any rules stated in the subject guide and is NOT "double-dipping" or using texts that are not permitted 
  • ensure the student understands the importance of using credible/accurate sources
  • monitor the progress of the extended essay to offer guidance and to ensure that the essay is the student’s own work and the student has properly acknowledged all sources  
A good student-topic-supervisor fit is likely when the supervisor:
  • knows the student well
  • shares the student's excitement and curiosity about the topic
  • is comfortable establishing a clear work plan with the student
  • follows up with timely feedback
 
EE Supervisors are only permitted to comment on 1 completed draft of your Extended Essay. Completed drafts, with bibliography, are due in May prior to the end of your your junior year.
 
Supervisor Support
"Advice should be in terms of the way the work could be improved, but the draft must not be heavily annotated or edited by the supervisor" (EE Guide, pp 63-64)
 
Student Reflection in the EE

 

Reflection is an activity in which you recapture your experience and think about its impact on you as a
learner. This includes how you envisage transferring the skills and lessons you have learned to other
circumstances, including future studies, career or life in general.


• To assist you with this, there are 3 formal reflection sessions (Initial, Interim, Final-viva voce) with your supervisor.
• Your reflective thinking is recorded as a 500-word reflective statement that is written at the end of
the extended essay process.
• Keeping an ongoing record of your reflective thinking will support you in the writing of the reflective
statement.

 

The 500-word reflective statement

Your reflective thinking is recorded as a 500-word reflective statement, written at the end of the extended
essay process and included on your RPF. Keeping a thoughtful, regular record of your reflective thinking
along the way is essential to putting together a satisfying, effective reflective statement to accompany your
essay.


What resources can I use to help me write the reflective statement?
• My record of the viva voce
• My record of the other reflection sessions with my supervisor
• My completed extended essay
• My RRS or any other record of my reflective thinking
• Informal feedback from my supervisor and others


What might I address in my reflective statement?
• The main ideas discussed in the viva voce
• Learning skills I developed that I could use elsewhere as a learner
• Insights I gained from researching and writing the extended essay
• Changes in my perspective on the topic
• The impact of the choices I made during the extended essay process
• Experiences and insights that could shape my future thinking

 
How will my reflection be assessed?
 
Your attendance at the 3 reflection sessions will be recorded on the RPF. The form will also provide a
space for you to write your 500-word reflective statement and will be submitted with your extended essay.
 
IB Examiners will assess your reflective statement using criterion E, which centres on the guiding question

“Does the student evaluate the effect of the extended essay learning experience on them as a learner?”
 
Examiners will look for the following features in your reflective statement:
 
• Reflection on the extended essay learning experience is consistently evaluative and includes specific
examples.
• Reflection consistently shows evidence of the student’s growth and transfer of learning.
Evidence referred to in your reflection may be drawn from, but is not limited to, some of the following.
• Experiences and insights that could shape future thinking.
• Explicit examples of how skills learned could be used in other current contexts and in the future.
• How changes in perspective impacted decision-making.
1st & 2nd Reflection Sessions
3rd Reflection Session
 
*After the 3rd (Final) Reflection Session, the viva voce concluding interview, EE Supervisors will complete their supervisor comments to account for student reflections attendance AND to contextualize the student's engagement with the process & include hours spent with candidate (3-5 hrs permitted).
 
Assessment in the EE

 

Assessment Criteria: 30 marks

 

Criterion A: Framework for the essay (6 marks) 
-Focuses on research question AND research methods
-Structural conventions used to effectively communicate the research 

 

Criterion B: Knowledge and understanding (6 marks) 
-Knowledge (research materials used to establish knowledge of subject matter) 
-Terminology used accurately AND concepts explained and used effectively 

 

Criterion C: Analysis and line of argument  (6 marks) 
-Analysis is effective and produces relevant findings
-Line of argument links the RQ, research findings and conclusions

 

Criterion D: Discussion and evaluation (8 marks)
-Balanced discussion of significance of findings supported by evidence
-Evaluation of effectiveness of essay with relevant strengths and limitations explained

 

Criterion E: Reflection – 500-word statement (4 marks) 
-Evaluative reflection on the learning experience
-Evidence of growth and transfer of learning

Presentation in the EE
 

The extended essay should be written in a clear, correct and formal academic style, appropriate to the subject from which the topic is drawn. Given that the extended essay is a formally written research paper, it should strive to maintain a professional, academic look.

To help achieve this, the following formatting is suggested.

    • font, font size and spacing conducive to on-screen marking (ex. 12 point, Arial)
    • page numbering (top right corner of the page)
    • no candidate, supervisor, or school name on the title page, page headers, appendices or acknowledgment pages
    • the file size must not be more than 10 MB. (Note that the RPF is uploaded separately and is not part of the overall file size of the essay.)

Submitting the extended essay in the required format will help set the tone of the essay and will aid readability for on-screen assessment by examiners.

 
6 Required Elements of the EE
 
Title Page
Do NOT include your name, ONLY the following:
EE Title Page
Contents Page A contents page must be provided at the beginning of the extended essay and all pages should be numbered. Please note that an index page is not required and if included will be treated as if it is not present.
Introduction

The introduction should tell the reader what to expect in the essay. The introduction should make clear to the reader the focus of the essay, the scope of the research, in particular an indication of the sources to be used, and an insight into the line of argument to be taken. While students should have a sense of the direction and key focus of their essay, it is sometimes advisable to finalize the introduction once the body of the essay is complete.

Body of the essay

Research, analysis, discussion and evaluation:

The main task is writing the body of the essay, which should be presented in the form of a reasoned argument. The form of this varies with the subject of the essay but as the argument develops it should be clear to the reader what relevant evidence has been discovered, where/how it has been discovered and how it supports the argument. In some subjects, for example, the sciences, subheadings within the main body of the essay will help the reader to understand the argument (and will also help the student to keep on track). In structuring their extended essay, students must take into consideration the expected conventions of the subject in which their extended essay is registered.

Once the main body of the essay is complete, it is possible to finalize the introduction (which tells the reader what to expect) and the conclusion (which says what has been achieved, including notes of any limitations and any questions that have not been resolved).

Any information that is important to the argument must not be included in appendices or footnotes/endnotes. The examiner will not read notes or appendices, so an essay that is not complete in itself will be compromised across the assessment criteria.

Conclusion The conclusion says what has been achieved, including notes of any limitations and any questions that have not been resolved. While students might draw conclusions throughout the essay based on their findings, it is important that there is a final, summative conclusion at the end. This conclusion(s) must relate to the research question posed.
 
Works Cited (MLA)
or
References (APA)
A bibliography is an alphabetical list of every source used to research and write the essay. Sources that are not cited in the body of the essay but were important in informing the approach taken should be cited in the introduction or in an acknowledgment. The bibliography must list only those sources cited
 

Citations:

"A citation is a shorthand method of making a reference in the body of an essay, either as an in-text citation or footnote/endnote. This must then be linked to the full reference at the end of the essay in the bibliography. A citation provides the reader with accurate references so that he or she can locate the source easily. How sources are cited varies with the particular referencing style that has been chosen. Page numbers should normally be given when referencing printed material and this is especially so in the case of direct quotations. For some styles this will also be in the citation, in others in the full reference. Once again, it is important to emphasize that there must be consistency of method when citing sources."

*Include page numbering/page headers (with shortened version of title/research question), double-spacing, 12-point font conducive to on-screen marking (Arial)
 
IMPORTANT: If you're thinking about including an Appendices at the end of your essay (after your Bibliography) please review the link above to determine if it's appropriate as examiners are NOT required to read them!
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EE Resources
 
EE Guide (First assessment 2027)
 
*The DP class of 2027 can access the guide in their EE Google Classroom. 
Academic Integrity
 
 
It is the responsibility of the student and supervisor to confirm with the appropriate DP subject teacher that the selected EE topic is NOT an extension of an internal assessment (IA) AND they are not using material that will be submitted for any other IB assessment component.
 
Additionally, Studies in language and literature EEs may NOT be based on a text studied in the student's course.
 
Citations/Bibliography:
 
Key points to remember regarding academic honesty and referencing:
 
"The essay must provide the reader with the precise sources of quotations, ideas and points of view through accurate citations..."
 
"A bibliography is an alphabetical list of every source used to research and write the essay. Sources that are not cited in the body of the essay but were important in informing the approach taken should be cited in the introduction or in an acknowledgment. The bibliography must list only those sources cited."
 
"A reference is a way of indicating to the reader, in an orderly form, where information has been obtained."
 
"References must be given whenever someone else's work is quoted or summarized..."
 
 
 
*Students are expected to use Turnitin (a similarity check & grammar tool) to help ensure citation accuracy.
Writing Tips
 
  • Don't procrastinate! Devise a plan to work on sections of your essay. Breaking it up into sections makes the writing process more manageable: 
    • Introduction - be sure to include the actual research question itself in the introduction, the factors being investigated to answer the question, the research subject-specific methodology/approach being used (the type of sources/data you intend to analyze in your own unique way) and why the topic is worth investigating.
    • Body - your essay should continuously relate back to the research question in an attempt to answer it and should be broken up into various headings, and maybe even subheadings depending on your topic or subject. Use separate paragraphs under each heading/section to further break up/organize your discussion points. Be careful to avoid writing a narrative essay by simply "retelling" events - instead focus on analyzing the information you've gathered.
    • Conclusion - is used to reiterate your key findings and how your points relate to the research question, any limitations regarding your research methods or sources, and to summarize your final analysis
    • Works Cited (MLS) or References (APA) - cite as you write using in-text citations (using either MLA or APA referencing style) & provide an alphabetized list of the sources you actually used in your essay. Let Citation Machine do the hard work for you by properly formatting both your in-text & bibliography citations!
  • Create an outline. It can help to organize your ideas. Try using Post-it Notes to rearrange your ideas until you find the order you'd like to present your discussion points/analysis
  • Just start writing! You don't even need to begin writing in complete sentences. Just get something down on "paper" even if it's just bullet points. You can also write each section in whatever order you prefer. In fact, it's not uncommon to write the introduction section last! 
  • You're not looking for perfection with your 1st DRAFT. The goal is to write a complete draft so you can receive the BEST feedback since your supervisor can only read 1 draft. After your feedback session, you'll have the opportunity to make any edits or revisions to "perfect" your essay to your liking, and please reach out to me with any formatting or presentation questions!